criticism

  i like how in his picture he has has shallow depth which means that photo is focused on the area closest to him but blurs out the area farther away. also i like how the rain drops are very focussed and easy to see. but i do think that he could have a better surface for the raindrops to be on. also i feel like there isn't enough happening in the photo and it doesn't really grab your attention when you look at it.